It rains as you sit on the swings at the park,
you imagine the rain as tears from the clouds.
But the sky isn’t the only one crying, you are too.
It isn’t as simple as it seems.
You wipe away your tears and just live in the moment,
you feel a cold breeze along your shoulder.
It smells fresh, but warm.
It feels like you just ate a warm, hearty dish.
The night sky comforts you as you sit there, alone.
The moon looks like it’s looking down at you.
Not simply, it’s looking down at you with grace and sympathy,
it’s looking for a way it can sit next to you and listen.
But all it can do is be there for you,
it’s not like it’s close enough to talk to you anyways.
That was always your perspective of the moon.
You never thought “The Man in The Moon” was interesting at all,
because the moon is its own person.
It’s just like saying “The Girl in The Cloud”.
It’s the cloud crying down, not the girl inside it.
The rain stays with you,
just tears coming down to tell you that you aren’t alone.
So even when you think that you don’t make a change,
nature has its own way to tell you that you matter.
It just can’t speak.
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This is such a beautiful poem. The way you describe the rain, the moon, and feelings is really special. I love how you imagine nature having emotions—it shows a very creative and kind mind. 🌙🌧️
Keep writing and sharing your thoughts like this. Your words matter, and you have a gift for expressing feelings in a powerful way. I’m really proud of you. 💛
This is a beautifully written piece. Your use of imagery and personification especially the way you describe the rain and the moon creates a strong emotional atmosphere. I really liked how you included sensory details like the feeling of the breeze and warmth, which made the scene feel vivid and real. There’s also a thoughtful perspective behind your words, showing depth and originality in how you see nature and emotions. You have a natural gift for writing, keep expressing your ideas, it’s truly special
Thank you for sharing your poems with me!! I knew you have had a way with words since I met you. You’re such a kind and genuine human being and I’m forever proud! Keep up the good work. Maybe this is something you can teach in our class 🙂 if you’re up for the challenge!
Love you Celineyy Bobeaniee <3 beautifully written