I can see tiny twinkles that are glowing by a big oak tree,
I climb up the tree in the magical woods,
Little hidden windows upon,
I hear little voices and jingles like bells,
Perhaps they could be fairies I thought,
I see flowers that look as if they’re painted,
I see birds with elves upon them,
The song that they sing seems magical,
In the mysterious woods.
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Good. I still don’t quite know what the line – Little hidden windows upon – means.
And I thought is in the past tense and you are telling the poem in the present. In fact you don’t need to say you thought it – I think it is obvious. So the line could be… Perhaps they could be fairies.