The Whizz-bang and Other Bangs

by Valbone aged 9

When the candles faded out,
There was a whizzing sound,
Suddenly there was a bang,
Soldiers ran and ran,
In the sea there were
U boats and ships,
Ships were shooting ,
And shooting at them,
It was noise as a bomb,
It was cold as ice,
It was so windy,
You couldn’t even imagine,
How it was

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