RUNNER UP
What an AMAZING invention!
Without it, everything was tension,
What an amazing glow,
Helps us see,
And know where to go,
Absolute perfection!
Shows us the depth of this world,
Easy was nothing to see once,
The night sky makes everything black,
But Edison created luminosity,
Made 100% economically,
Now its your chance to use it properly!
THANKS TO EDINOUSITY!
(Edinous, edinousity is a mixture of the words Edison and Luminous/Luminosity)
I liked both your poems. Very clever. You didn’t quite win but well done!
Thank you. Being a runner up on poetry zone is a blessing for me. Thank you !