I saw a bear,
Who was in tear,
It hurts its hand,
Sitting in the sand.
Then came its friend the cat,
Giving bear a pat,
It held the bear’s hand tight,
Taking its care all night.
Setting the message right,
that a friend in need
Is actually a friend indeed.
Very nice poem by an emerging little talented poetess. Keep on going.
superb
Beautiful poetry well written and message is clear n loud… Keep it up Aditi Great…A writer in making.
Well written.. Beautiful
What a conscious lines you had written aditi…. God bless you for your future…
Very nice… Keep it up.
Very nice as it recall my old true friends to whom I am not getting time to meet.
Thanks for this as I will forward them to express my gratitude to them
True lines … Friendship is actually god gift to everyone.
So sweet! The poem brings a big smile on my face. All the best poetess. Waiting for more!
Beautiful little poem, will surely be the foundation for future creations.
Very nice poem. All the best Aditi. God bless you.
Good effort my little angle.. may your creations become better day by day
Keep it up Aditi. Very nice poem? .All the best.?
Well done keep it up rising star
Fantastic….very proud of you dear .
Wonderful poem Kuhu. Keep writing. Never stop. You will do good.
Well done Aditi.Beautifully written.Keep going Beta
Good job Aditi…
Excellent ..very proud of you dear .
Good job Aditi … good message conveyed…. keep going budding poetess !!!!
Super Adithi. Keep writing.
Fantastic message through beautiful poem. Keep it up.
Superb. Very nice poem. Keep it up. Touch in the sky.
Good
Beautiful poem. God bless you Aditi!
Very well written.. way to go baby
Lovely.. keep on writing more and nurturing your talent. ?
Very sweet and apt wordings of the poem for the saying, a friend in need is a friend indeed. Good job. God bless you
Well done. Keep it up. Waiting for more in fure
Beautiful poem Aditi.. Keep going!!
Superb Aditi. Keep on writing
Very well written .Keep it up.
Good job dear?…..short and sweet. Expessed very well
Very well written!!!! Keep it up!!! We await more of ur writings!!!!
Beautifully written by a beautiful little girl. Proud of you. Keep going.
Superb little champ?
God bless u beta
Blessed to be your facilitator once….
You are amazing!! Keep writing ????