Suddenly, a boy named Tim
who was very slim,
so slim he could go under door cracks,
got stuck under a door
and stayed there.
Why, Tim, why?
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Suddenly, a boy named Tim
who was very slim,
so slim he could go under door cracks,
got stuck under a door
and stayed there.
Why, Tim, why?
That’s a very strange poem, Lacey. I think you need to spend a little more time on your writing. Write it quickly, then go back and tidy it up so that it makes more sense. That’s what I’ve done with your poem. A great idea. What ever will Tim do next? Will he escape?