Things You Can See in the Summer

by Kiya aged 11

Look at the flowers
what do you see
colourful creches
or blood in the sea
Look at your cars what do you see
shiny cars
or awful graces me

One Response to “Things You Can See in the Summer”

  • Roger Stevens

    Hi Grace. I'[m sorry, I don’t quite understand your poem. What are creches? And what did the last line mean to say. let me know and I’ll change it. Also, ask your teacher to email me and I’ll send a letter to your class.

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