the sky is blue
the sky is white
but it’s very dark at night
we like the sun
we like the moon
but soon it will be noon
the stars twinkle
the planets swirl
and I was the first on top of the world
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i like the small amount of cohesion and repetition – well done!
I like that you have used the right amount of cohesion and repetition. Good job!
Oops it is there twice
i was very proud with myself