in through the mouth
down the throat
oesophagus down south
in a little food boat
past the liver
into the belly
in this river
it’s rather smelly
intestine small and large
then around a bend
through the body on my mini barge
then out the other end!
Excellent. Have a think about titles when you write a poem. The Digestive System is a bit prosaic. How about “Journey” or “going down”. Have a think about it.
thank you for the feedback
i will definitely remember for next time
thanks for the feedback. I will definitely remember for next time.