There was once a girl, she was going to the folly
but her mum said “Do you want a lolly?”
No thank you, they hurt my teeth
i`m not taking them because I`m not a thief
So she went to the folly
and met up with her friend Molly
They walked to the shop to get some pop
There they met Kye
and the time passed by
so then they went home
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its realy good but you two made a wee spelling mistake on the last line!
That was my fault. I’ve fixed it now. Thanks for spotting it, Layla.