The sun comes in the day,
The moon comes in the night.
The sun gives us rays,
The moon gives us light.
The water settles in the bay,
Giving us the message “Don’t fight”
Learn from your mistakes every day,
It makes you intelligent every night.
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Very good poem with a nice message.
Lovely poem with a nice message.
I like it
Very nice poem
Simple,sweet and a lovely poem with a great message which we elders don’t follow in our routine
Imaginary thoughts. Wish her a great future.
Very nicely expressed. A little kid with a big lesson for grown ups. I loved it. Keep expressing yourself more often like this. Let me know. I’ll definitely read it and send it to others I know who’ll read and enjoy this. MAY God Bless You and Everyone Yours Abundantly.
Nice poem and good message.
Keep it up
Excellent, there is a meaning in it to understand and implement
Very nice poem!! Its awesome that a 6 year old is blessed with such talent. ☺️ Good work
Yeah I agree great poem
I am proud of you Aditi, post many more and hope to see you achieve great things in the world.
Your class one teacher
Lalitha Elia
Wonderful message to human beings and a gentle remainder, to improve the quality of human touch and humanity in their words and deeds.
Aditi your poem is very nice. Congrates well done. God bless you
Very nice, meaningful and well written….keep it up young poet
Excellent and innocent,
Very nice poetry by a lil girl. Congrates aditi. Many more to go. God bless you.
Nice
Excellent poetry with a beautiful content. I wish u all the best for your future endeavours
Hey Adithi, you really brought the nice thoughts in your young mind through a lovely poem. Way to reach heights buddy….
Good one and keep writing such poems, which will enlighten everyone.
Congratulations Aditi for your nice poetry……All the best.
Excellent effort Aditi.May Good bless u.
such a lovely poetry with meaningful message. keep on writing.God bless you.
Very nice poem Aditi. Keep it up.
God Bless
Very nice poem Aditi. keep on writing. Gud luck.
Such a nice poem aditi.may God bless you
Awesome poetry.. No words.. Proud of you.. God bless u.. 🙂
Aditi, thanks for the reminder about “learning from our mistakes”…..Congrats keep writing….. 🙂
Good poem with meaningful message..
Keep writing
Really Very good!
I loved your use of English and descriptive language.
Keep it up 🙂
Wonderfull. very creative….nice job , well done keep it up..
Very good poem. Wow Aditi! Keep it up. May God bless you!
Great job, Aditi beta. Your talent is evident at a very young age….keep it up 🙂
Good one. Keep it up.
Superb…Very nice poem, simply gr8 aditi..God bless
Awesome wording and thoughts ….Well written. Keep it up Kuhu..
Give wings to your thoughts and keep spreading your eternal light….. Proud of You my ..
Innocent poem but with a very deep message.
awesome poem.
Wow nice poem Aditi, and nice write. I really enjoyed this work of yours. I look forward to reading and enjoying more of your thoughts put to paper.
Great thought Aditi…..Mubarak for such a nice poem.
Lovely poem….God bless you Aditi
Very brilliant spark at such an early age. Way to go girl!!
Very nice dear. Jaisa baap waisa beti!
Well written keep it up.God bless u