Those who are successful are like springs
When they lose, they are wound back
Little by little
Until they are completely rewound
And then like Jack-in-the-Box,
They spring right back up again
Even when they are pulled down
They don’t give up
Until their spring is rusty
And the bullies aren’t capable of pulling them back
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Hi. You’re revenge poem needs a little more work I think. You need to strip v2 and v3 down – and give them the same two beats to a line as verse one. A couple of those lines just spoil the rhythm and feel clunky. Say them out loud and you’ll hopefully see what I mean.