Spaghetti Bolognese

by Joel aged 7

As pretty as some chocolate
As curly as rock
As spicy as a pepper

2 Responses to “Spaghetti Bolognese”

  • Joel

    It should say
    As curly as a snails shell
    I want to add
    As slippery as an icy pavement

    Reply
  • Joel

    I want to put in
    As curly as a snails shell
    As slippery as an icy pavement.

    Reply
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