The start of winter,
Cold, and pitch black,
Until a drop of ice falls on to the ground,
Fluffy like a teddy bear,
In a small amount of time,
It started coming down faster,
Flooding the streets
Freezing everywhere
The kid comes
And creates a snowman,
That has a bright smile.
I like it, Jaspreet. But I think you need a better line 8.
Can you give me some ideas to what Chang it too. I wanted to have a bit of rhyming to it
How about – “Freezing everywhere.” Then your line 8 will rhyme with your line 4.
Thank you I would re post it with that new word 🙂
After you’ve written a poem it’s good to go back and look at it to 1) check it makes sense and 2) look at the rhymes. Rhymes don’t always have to be in the obvious places.