Me and My Friend

by Emma aged 16

Me and my friend
we like to play
we like to sing
we like to dance

2 Responses to “Me and My Friend”

  • Roger Stevens

    Your poem starts out okay, Emma, but I think it needs to be longer. You could have some fun with a list of all the things you both like to do.

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  • Roger Stevens

    PS We don’t usually post poems with fake names, unless they are nom de plumes. You could invent a character who writes poems, and write them for her.

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