The Puddle

by Patrick Melchor aged 6

A dog and a duck and a little puddle
They couldn’t both fit in
So they had a cuddle
The duck liked the puddle
But he didn’t like the cuddle

Competition Winner! Well done, Patrick.

3 Responses to “The Puddle”

  • Roger Stevens

    Well done, Patrick. Ask your parent to send us your address (or your school) and we’ll send you your prize.

    Reply
  • tom

    Google job you did a extreme job
    good job, i cannot believe you didn’t win a competition

    Reply
  • tess kane smyth

    YOU DIDNT WRITE THIS POEM I DID WHEN I WAS 6 WHY DID I NOT GET A PRIZE FOR THIS

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