A dog and a duck in a little puddle
They couldn’t both fit in
so they had a cuddle
The duck liked the puddle
but he didn’t like the cuddle
The dog liked the cuddle
but he didn’t like the puddle.
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why do you like writing poems
Fantastic poem! Made me laugh, you have talent young lady. Thank you for sharing it.
oh my goodness im tess here 6 years later
hi mary, this is tess, 6 years later (im 13 now) an i just found this and i remember writing this poem but i never knew it had been posted. i wanted to say that your comment means a lot to me, even though its only small but i was only 6 when i wrot this lol
Hi. It looks like Patrick copied your poem without me noticing. I’m very sorry about that. He must have then put it into the competition.
He never claimed his prize, guilty I guess. I will delete his poem.