1
Smoke all around
The beating sound of gunfire in my ear
And the dead soldiers lying on the ground
Dead but still alive
2
A bomb about to go off
Stood there like a statue
5…4…3…2…1
Dead soldiers lying on the ground
Dead but still alive
3
A whistle blowing
Long and loud
Blowing to signal the men
Over the top we go
Over the top
Dead soldiers lying on the ground
Dead but still alive
4
A field dotted with paint
Red and white
Where the fallen are at rest
Dead soldiers lying on the ground
Dead but still remembered

Excellent, James. Well done.
Wow James you are a true poet!. I love your poem because it’s really moving!