What a Persuasive Letter!

by Risha Tanwar aged 9

Dear Chocolate Maker,

Unappetising, inextraordinary, tasteless- is this the reputation you would like to hold for your sweets?
These don’t appeal to me as nice treats.

Everyone agrees you are the best chocolate maker in the world,
Not one person after eating your confectionary would have hurled.

Anyway let’s get to the point,
I would like to share my viewpoint.

I would like to attempt to ask you to make my delight,
People’s eyes will glisten in the light.

This fruit is straight from the Amazon Rainforest,
After eating this you shall be nourished.

The filling is concocted by the inventor,
After it sits and waits in the centre.

What do you think, would you manufacture this?
If not, it would be a big fat miss.

Thank you for all of your time,
Don’t be rushed take all night and daytime.

Yours Sincerely,
Risha Tanwar

The Poetry Zone

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