Popular and cool, always happy and upbeat
She glows, fairer than all the rest
Elegant in her ways, graceful on her feet
Smart and intelligent, she aces every test
For no guy in life will she halt
She exists within my mind and soul
She is a being with no flaws or faults
She is my hopes; My dreams and goals
But she lacks feelings, ability to be in awe
Her perfections make her inhumane
Her no-faults is her biggest flaw
So is her ability to do things without strain
And though she is my model, she is the person I want to be
She will never, ever be the perfect me
Very good. But you need to get the line stresses sorted. Each line should have a short beat followed by a stressed beat five times. So each line goes…
di DUM di DUM di DUM di DUM di DUM
So your first line could be…
She’s popular and cool, always upbeat…
I see… I’ll try to get the beat right next time