Out Of City Rush

by Sherdil Asif aged 9

Yesterday I went out of the city,
I was in a rush,
So I forgot to brush.
My sister was in the bathroom,
I didn’t even wait for her to flush!
After all that,
In the middle of the motorway,
I thought that I forgot something,
“My sister”! I screamed,
It took three hours to go back to pick her up,
“Why can’t you remember to take me too”! she screamed angrily,
I slightly laughed and said,
“Uh actually it was out of city rush”

2 Responses to “Out Of City Rush”

  • Shifa Asif

    So cool! It’s a very good poem I really like it as I am in it. You have used cool rhyming words. Your ending is also great. The title of the poem is admiring and apt to the theme of the story.
    Good Shifa.

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  • Sherdil Asif

    Thank you very much. I also read your poems they are wonderful and my favourite poems of yours is “ What is SHE

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