Our Day Out

Posted April 26, 2023 by Riti Pamecha aged 15

Every day
Yesterday
Two days
Tomorrow day
The last day…
Our first day
Was not today
But instead yesterday
Was our day out

2 Responses to “Our Day Out”

  • Umaima

    Hey riti I think that this is a very effective poem that’s very good and amazing but also I rate it 10 out of 10

    Reply
  • Andria

    Hi riti. Lovely poem! Keep writing like this and you might just end up homeless!
    Love your work

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