One Day

by Elsa Y aged 9

Fairy’s twinkle, glitter, dust
Toy cars vroom with all of us
Shiny objects dance around
Then they start to make a sound
Lights bling
Like the best thing
Yellow, blue, orange, red
Until it’s time to go to bed

One Response to “One Day”

  • Roger Stevens

    I’ve added a line of colours, and made the last line scan. What do you think?

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