The Old House

by Sarvesh aged 10

On the end of the street,
There’s a rusty old house,
Which is inhabited by a dirty mouse.

There’s a crooked old man,
Who received a ban
From football, by his manager.

There’s also a chatterbox,
Really a person who loves a fox,
She’s a talkative old lady
Who has a daughter called Heidi.

So they lived until the age of 99,
Which was really old
And then their house had to be sold.

One Response to “The Old House”

  • Roger Stevens

    Hi Sarvesh. I took the liberty of adding a bit on the end of your poem. I hope that’s okay. It ended a bit suddenly, so I thought you could add a rhyme, and round the poem off by mentioning its subject again.

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