Oh Australia

by lauan aged 9

Oh, Australia I love you.
Oh, Australia, your sky so blue.
Oh, Australia I love your deserts, mountains, also fountains, all of you.
Oh, Australia I love you, so traditional in this land
Oh, Australia here you stand over them all s
Oh Australia, we love you
Look at you, dear Australia.

One Response to “Oh Australia”

  • Roger Stevens

    Hi Iauan. I’ve edited it a bit as some of it didn’t make sense. I think after you’ve written a poem read it through carefully to make sure it makes sense. It’s also helpful to read it out loud, to get an idea of how it sounds, something I always do.

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