New Puppy

by Rosie aged 10

On Sunday we got a new puppy
He runs around everywhere
As mad as he can be
But sometimes he is a bit naughty
And on the carpet he does a wee!

 

One Response to “New Puppy”

  • Roger Stevens

    Hi Rosie. We don’t usually allow mentions of wee – but as it’s a puppy we’ll let you off this time. This is almost a limerick. But the fourth line is too long. You might like to rework it?

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