Runner Up
A white ball, the rabbit in a deep, deep place.
His eyes were filled with hearts,
and his body was moving in sand,
because he saw orange sticks lying around,
and green leafy balls,
as cool as a pool.
Hiding behind the hairy bushes,
the rabbit noticed twinkling stars in the sea and jumped in.
The rabbit wondered in the dark placed he jumped in.
He saw mermaids and saw some fish,
and a big big shark.
He was frightened so he jumped from the sea to a park.
The rabbit was freezing cold.
Warm he became as my hands held him tightly close to me.
well done Shifa! You can do even better!