Flying Saucers

by Skye Davies aged 8

Every day, I like to eat flying saucers,
my favourite sweet.
I bite one
And pour the sherbet out
I feel so happy I shout
after I wash it down with coke
My belly is full I give it a poke

One Response to “Flying Saucers”

  • Roger Stevens

    Hi Skye. Good work. I didn’t know they still made flying saucers. I think you need a better last line. Don’t worry about making it rhyme.

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