Mountains Nature

Posted April 7, 2020 by Sherdil Asif aged 7

Mountains like green curtains,
The giant mountains walking with the tornadoes,
The tornadoes, mixture of wind and smoke
Opened the mountains,
And there came a huge fairyland,
Swinging fairies in the park.
Talked to the fairies,
Who are you?
I am from the upper part!
Go home! They said,
Sent me up in a carriage,
Went up the mountain,
Mountains joined again!

2 Responses to “Mountains Nature”

  • Iliana

    I love the metaphors, adjectives and literslly EVERYTHING in this poem. It’s beautiful and awesome. 🙂

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    • Sherdil Asif

      Thank you very much! Your comment is very encouraging for me!

      Reply
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