The elephant silvery blue
trumpet up on cue
long trunk, wise eyes
huge, immense size
The magical water shine
twisting water vine
through the body
can’t you see?
Magical mist
in the sun
crazy chemical
element
The beast rears up
into the sky
past trees and clouds
night sky high
Through the trunk
mystical spray
rainbow water
shout hooray
Elephant rainbow
in the sky
elephant rainbow
up so high
Excellent poem. Good work. I’ve added the sun in verse three, which was a bit odd. You need the sun to make the rainbow happen.
Hi there my poem called trees wasnt put up. I wrote it yesterday
There’s a poem called Trees by “Hi” aged 6. Was that you? If not, for some reason I didn’t receive it. So post it again. I’m enjoying your poems BTW.
Ye was me
oh yay thank you
Visions flash by. Great. Nik
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