I loved a boy, his name was Paul
You could say “Paul and Emily”, it sounded perfect
He stood up to speak
And I thought it was about me
He said, “I love a girl, she stares at me.”
And I thought, Well it had to be me!!!
A few days later our drama teacher came into our class
And said, Paul, your speech was wonderful, you can put up that love in you.
My heart sank
Well I thought it was me
But now I can’t even think
But then Paul said
“It was about a girl and I love her”
Who was it?
Please let it be me
I couldn’t breath
Then it was out
“Rachel, you’re my girl”
My heart sank
I had a tearful moment
I remembered in year 1
We loved each other
But it’s too late now
Then
I was no longer alive
I had died…
I had died…
Hi Emily,
your poem was amazing I loved the way you have done this!! Well done!! 🙂
Thank you this was the first comment so thanks!!!!!!
I think that this is a pretty good poem so if I get up to 10 comments I will post more!!##
Not even one 🙁
LOVE IT IS AMAZING MUCH BETTER THAN MINE IS IT POUL FROM SCHOOL