What I Love to Do

by Ava aged 7

I love it when my mom
kisses me good night
she is just like the like the stars
that shine so bright
I love to do gymnastics and play football
when I was younger I couldn’t even kick a ball
I love lollipops and chocolate too
I especially love Aeros and a Bounty too
I love spar parties because they are fun and excite me
I love to write poems as you can see

One Response to “What I Love to Do”

  • Roger Stevens

    Hi Ava. After you’ve written a poem, read it through and you can sometimes see little changes that will really improve it. I changed exciting at the end to excite me, and now the end rhymes.

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