Lonely and sad
that women made her mad
she ran into the kitchen
where she thought her hurtful comment
you are
Heart breaker
so when you think
where that anger is coming from
you realise you’re being bullied
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Hi Jessica. I’ve laid your poem out in lines. But the middle doesn’t really make sense. Maybe you could have a look at it, rewrite it a bit, and resend?