Kitty

by Sulaf Yassein aged 9

There was a cat called Kitty,
Her best friend was called Nitty,
Her tail was chopped,
But she still hopped,
It wasn’t very pretty.

One Response to “Kitty”

  • Roger Stevens

    I hope you don’t mind, Sulaf – but I changed the end of your poem. When you write a limerick try and make each line have the same rhythm. That’s why I added “best” in line two. Say it out loud and you’ll see what I mean. Then try and think of a last line that rhymes AND makes sense.

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