If only you could see
A swarm of hollow men
Crawling, climbing, clambering
Onto the ghostly train
Back to the devil
If only you could touch
The sticky mud
In a disgusting swamp
Crawling, choking, drowning
Drowning
If only you could hear
Froth-corrupted gargles
Of courageous soldiers
Sobbing, suffocating, writhing
Like screaming in a mineshaft
If only you could see
Tear stained poppies
Weeping, sobbing, singing
In the wind-the wind
Echoes the voices of heroic soldiers
If only you could remember
The fearless soldiers
Crawling, sprinting, clambering
Dying for their beloved country
Trying the best they can.

Excellent poem. Well done.