I Wish You Would Understand

by Bethany aged 11

harte beets faris coulers
and promisess how to be brave
how can i love wen i am afred one step clocer !!!!!!!!!
i have die evryday waiting for you darlid
you will be afred i have love you for a thouesnd years!!!
and wish you wold understand
i love you for a thpusend years.
so i wish you coud understand me talking slowly
since me in the room snugling up crying
like their is no were to stared like their is no were to STARED
sssssssssssssssS
cus i have die evryday waiting for you daely
dont be afred
i have love you of a thousend years
now loved for a thouesend years
and i wish you would understand
i have loved you for a thousend
yesesayacha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ans done.

One Response to “I Wish You Would Understand”

  • Roger Stevens

    Hi Bethany. Normally I would edit this, but I like the way the words come tumbling out, half formed, badly spelled. So I’ve just laid it in lines so it looks more like a poem. I like it.

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