I Saw a Shooting Star

by Alfie aged 8

I saw a shooting star
it didn’t seem that far
it was like a real fast rocket
that would fit inside my pocket

It darted across space
as if it was in a race
it was really yellow and bright
as it travelled through the night

I wonder where it’s been
and what it may have seen
Did it land on Earth
or smash into smithereens?

One Response to “I Saw a Shooting Star”

  • Roger Stevens

    I like this one lots, Alfie. I put it all into the past tense for you. Good work.

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