Hairy Monster

by Isla Causon aged 7

There was a monster under my bed
and he was a bit red.

He looked like a scary fairy.

He said, “My name is Fred.”
He started to eat some bread.

Please, oh please don’t eat me, monster Fred.

There was a monster under my bed and he was a bit red.
I told him he was bold and also gold.
He was a bit shiny and also a bit whiny.

Please, oh please don’t eat me, monster Fred.

5 Responses to “Hairy Monster”

  • Amanda B

    Fantastic poem – really enjoyed reading it. Definite thumbs up from me!

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  • Ian

    What a great poem! I’ll be checking under my bed for red Fred. I hope he doesn’t eat me either ?

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  • Pat Causon

    A really good poem, Isla. You have used lots of interesting adjectives.xx

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  • Kelly-Ann

    Well done Isla, what a fantastic poem! Very clever! Xx

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