Have You Been a Good Boy, Kieran?

by Ellena Hebditch aged 9

It’s funny how often say to me, Kieran
Have you been a good boy?
Have you been a good boy?
And when they say it they say it again
Have you been a good boy?
Have you been a good boy?

I’ve been to a party, I go tea
I go to an aunt for a week at the sea
I come back from school or I’m playing a game
Wherever I go it’s always the same
Well,
Have you been a good boy, Kieran?

4 Responses to “Have You Been a Good Boy, Kieran?”

  • Ellena Hebditch

    Thanks

    I was only 9 at the time and I’m 11 know

    If I could change some it would be the very ending the very last work would be

    No

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  • Alex burton

    I love your work and would like for you to make one about me and the theme has to be about me and my favourite team West Ham and my favourite player chicharito. I would like you to put in the line “chi-cba-ri-to they said West Ham was finito then Slav went out to mex-i-co, and he brought back chicharitooooo”

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