My Friend Puppet

by Eva aged 7

My friend puppet has a cold
My friend puppet has gone bold
My friend puppet has a house that’s been sold
My friend puppet has got told
My friend puppet has gold folds
My friend puppet has grown old
My friend puppet has got a fine
My friend puppet has gone clip n climb
My friend puppet hides behind the slip n slide
My friend puppet has gone for a ride
My friend puppet has a heart of gold

One Response to “My Friend Puppet”

  • Roger Stevens

    Hi Eva. I hope you don’t mind but I’ve made a couple of changes when I edited your poem.
    You didn’t have a rhyming line for your last line and so I added one to make it all equal.
    Then I noticed you had an uneven number of “old” rhyming lines. So I moved one to the end to help round it all off.
    I can change it back if you don’t like it.

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