Football

by William aged 7

As great as when you are born
As hard as a brown tree
As filthy as a bin!

2 Responses to “Football”

  • Roger Stevens

    Great start, William. I think it needs to be a little bit longer though. Well done.

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  • William

    Thanks for your comment. How about adding
    As round as the earth,
    As battered as an old shoe.

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