One Response to “Fidget Spinner”

• Roger Stevens
  May 29, 2017

  Hi Eloise. I love it that you contribute so much to The Poetry Zone. But a couple of things I’d like to say. Firstly – the words in an acrostic (like Fidget Spinner) should relate to the subject. They shouldn’t just be random words. Otherwise it’s not really a poem. For example – what does Egg have to do with it? Secondly – I don’t put up poems with poo or other rude words in. So don’t send them. You could be a very good poet – just spend a little more time working on your poems.

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