Who said I had to have one word,
Not two or three or five?
These words that I have chosen,
Just make me wanna jive!
There’s kurfuffle and kerplunk,
Apricot and dunk.
And then there’s doala?
Okay, I made that up!
I need a word to replace doala,
It sounds a bit like koala?
But no… I want something else,
Ooh! I know… BANANA!
Hi Louise. I’m enjoying your poems. I changed melon to apricot in this, because it needed an extra syllable to scan properly. I could change it to something else if you’d rather. It needs to be three syllables.
Thank you that works better!!!
I think you came to my primary school last year to give a talk!! I remember you coming into my class!
When you send your next poem, include your school. Then I’ll be able to place you.