My Eddie

by Lewis Jebson aged 10

Today’s the day I found my boy
He then became my pride and joy
We had then found our own black beauty
He was such a little cutie

From the day I sat upon his back
We galloped along the rising track
He and I got into a groove
But from that day I had to move

When I let him go
I thought to myself – No, no, no
From the day we were apart
He would always be set in my heart

To my favourite little boy , Eddie

Excellent poem and a runner-up. Well done! RS

6 Responses to “My Eddie”

  • olivia tommo

    Lewis your poem is amazing and so emotional. you are great at writing poems and I hope. You have many more about horses. I love your poem and I hope you love it yourself.

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  • kaitlyn dw

    hi lewis u showed me this website at school great poem I remember when u read this out to the class and I cant belive u made it on to the internet and thx for the comment to lewis Olivia tommo

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  • Steve ,90

    hello lewis this poem reflects how i had to let you go from my base ment

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