Once upon a time
I built a den
And my name was Ben
It was red
Like a tomato
and the windows were as shiny
As a block of gold
And when I was walking
Out in the woods
A trap went boom!
And I went zoom!
Once upon a time
I built a den
And my name was Ben
It was red
Like a tomato
and the windows were as shiny
As a block of gold
And when I was walking
Out in the woods
A trap went boom!
And I went zoom!
well done, that is really impressive and I wish that was my poem because I would not have geased that a 5 and a half year old could do that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lovely poem, incredible use of imagery for such a young age, well done !