The Day I Built a Den

by Sam Decie aged 5 and a half

Once upon a time
I built a den
And my name was Ben

It was red
Like a tomato
and the windows were as shiny
As a block of gold

And when I was walking
Out in the woods
A trap went boom!

And I went zoom!

2 Responses to “The Day I Built a Den”

  • Tyla evans

    well done, that is really impressive and I wish that was my poem because I would not have geased that a 5 and a half year old could do that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Lucy

    Lovely poem, incredible use of imagery for such a young age, well done !

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