Christmas Bells

by Ashlyn Sanders aged 10

Oh Christmas Bells…

4 Responses to “Christmas Bells”

  • Roger Stevens

    Hi Ashlyn. I couldn’t work your poem out, sorry. You’ll have to work on it some more and send it again.

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  • Roger Stevens

    I don’t understand why the bells smell… or why they smell like a firedrill. I think you should stop trying to make it rhyme – and write down some of the things that Christmas bells remind you of. The things that happen at Christmas. Then write those things in your poem.

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