I wake up in our tent
I feel warm and cosy
Indie is crunching her cereal
I get out of bed for a nosey
After breakfast I put my togs on
I hear the river rushing
I hop in and it is cold
I hear all the kids fussing
We swam all day and now it is night
I have dinner
It is windy and the tent is flapping
We play board games and I am the winner
I am in my sleeping bag
I hear the penguins cooing
Grownups are laughing and joking
Tomorrow I know what I will be doing

I like it. Good work!