Camel

by Aaminah aged 7

Camel, camel
with a big hump
I wonder if they can jump
like us.

3 Responses to “Camel”

  • Hadil

    Nice to see you inspired by our Social Studies lesson about Camels my dear. I loved your poem! Just remove (like us) and try to add one more stanza or even two lines.

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  • Roger Stevens

    Or you could add four more lines. Make the second and third rhyme. Then make the last line rhyme with “like us”. That would be clever.

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    • Hadil

      Sounds very challenging. Thank you Roger. Go ahead Aminah and take up the challenge!

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