Butterfly butterfly on the flower
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Butterfly butterfly on the flower
Plays every time in every hour
Awesome sweety really beautiful
I am proud of you Saba. I hope to see more good poems from you.
Way to go my young talented poet!
Thank you Ms. Hadil
Saba your poem allowed me to use my imagination and I saw a butterfly fluttering playfully in a garden full of flowers.
Thank you Ms. Loraine
awww …. we have poet in the family …. bless u bacha
Thank you mamu
I m proud of u saba?
Thank you
“That’s our granddaughter :), so very proud of you beta”
Thank you dada
so she is not only good with her drawings and imagination, she is also very good with words, BRAVO!! Way to go girl 🙂 I am proud aunt now 😀 love you lots and lots and wish you the very best in everything ahead 🙂
Thank you phupho
Well, Saba, I think you should maybe write another. Here’s a challenge. See if you can write a longer poem, say 4 lines, or even 8. Read some of the other Poetry Zone entries to get some good ideas.
Thank you Sir I will try and post soon
I can sense that she has got what it takes to become a poet at this young age . Blessed. MashaAllah❤ go for more ?
Thank you Chachu
Wow sabaro god bless u ???
thank you
Nice job Saba! (PS I am in choir with you?)
Thanks Hania