I’m trapped in a cage
with a weight on my shoulders
The pain I went through
like moving boulders.
The determination and power to succeed
although outweighed by the lies
and the unfulfilled needs
of the many.
4 Responses to “Burden”
Claire
Your poem is beautiful.
It makes me think of you striving to fulfil your wonderful ambitions and potential in a world where people’s own negativity towards you and around you can weigh heavy on your shoulders.
And that cloud can feel like a burden on you when all you want to do is shine.
Well done, your amazing.
Your poem is beautiful.
It makes me think of you striving to fulfil your wonderful ambitions and potential in a world where people’s own negativity towards you and around you can weigh heavy on your shoulders.
And that cloud can feel like a burden on you when all you want to do is shine.
Well done, your amazing.
Sigmaaa
Hello, Oscar……
Good poem, Oscar!